
One day I was coming home from school. when I got inside my house I saw my parents. They seemed sad. I asked where the dog was.(He usually greeted me at the door.) they looked at me and an overwhelming pain came over me. I fell to the ground. I was trying to hold them back but the pain was too much. The tears spilled over. I couldn’t say anything. Except for "how" and "Y". I felt so bad it felt like I was going to die.

this is a really good post. But try to use your 5 senses more and then it would be even better :) gr8 job
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